ChatGPTを使った英語ライティング勉強の例

今回はgive it an edge　～に優位性を与えるというビジネスやテック系の英文によく出てくる熟語を使えるようになりたいと思い英作文をしてみました。それをAIに添削してもらい、そこからさらにいろんな提案をしてくるのでそれを受けてまた書いては自然な表現に訂正してもらい勉強していくということを実践してみたので、皆さんも参考にして自分が今勉強している構文、文法、熟語表現などを添削してもらってください。

英語学習ノート　

1. giving it an edge の表現  

あなたの文 

The company’s unique and innovative AI solution has been giving it an edge among other AI companies, monopolizing the market. 

 修正版

• The company’s unique and innovative AI solution has given it a competitive edge over other AI firms, allowing it to dominate the market.

• Thanks to its unique and innovative AI solution, the company has gained a strong competitive advantage, establishing a dominant position in the market.

 ポイント

• 「monopolize」は強すぎる → 「dominate」が自然

• 「among other AI companies」→「over other AI firms」の方が競争ニュアンスが明確 ⸻ 

 2. disruptive innovation の文  

あなたの文 

The company’s disruptive innovation has shocked the industry, giving it a competitive edge over other competitors, including tech giants such as Microsoft and Meta. 

 修正版 

• The company’s disruptive innovation has reshaped the industry, giving it a competitive edge over rivals, including tech giants such as Microsoft and Meta. 

• Through its disruptive innovation, the company has transformed the industry and secured a competitive advantage even over tech giants like Microsoft and Meta.  

ポイント

• 「shocked」は感情的すぎる → 「reshaped / transformed」

• 「other competitors」は冗長 → 「competitors / rivals」でOK 

 3. Generative AI の段落

あなたの文

Generative AI has gained wide adoption across the world since the inception of AI technologies. New enterprises are emerging to offer AI solutions in various fields such as government departments, defense systems, medicare, and logistics services. One such company is Palantir Technologies. Its unique and indispensable software has positioned the company as a leader in the AI industry. 

 修正版

• Generative AI has gained wide adoption across the world in recent years. New enterprises are emerging to offer AI solutions in fields such as government agencies, defense systems, healthcare, and logistics services. One such company is Palantir Technologies, whose unique and indispensable software has positioned it as a leader in the AI industry. 

ポイント

• 「since the inception of AI technologies」→ Generative AIは近年 → 「in recent years」 

• 「medicare」→ 「healthcare」

• 「government departments」→ 「government agencies」 

 4. giving it an edge の使い方

例 1. The company’s data-driven approach is giving it an edge in the highly competitive AI market. 

 2. Palantir’s ability to integrate complex data sources is giving it an edge over traditional software providers.

3. Its early investment in generative AI is giving it an edge against larger competitors.

4. The company’s strong relationship with government agencies is giving it an edge in securing long-term contracts.

5. Continuous innovation is giving it an edge and helping it stay ahead of industry trends.

 5. Palantirの bootcamp 文

あなたの文

The marketing method Palantir uses called “bootcamp” is gaining popularity among companies that are considering to adopt AI solutions to enhance their business, giving it an edge over competitors. 

 修正版

• Palantir’s “bootcamp” marketing method is gaining popularity among companies considering adopting AI solutions to enhance their business, giving it an edge over competitors. 

• Palantir’s marketing approach, known as “bootcamp,” is increasingly popular among companies exploring AI solutions to enhance their operations, thereby giving it a competitive edge over rivals. 

 ポイント

• 「consider to adopt」 → 「consider adopting」

• 「The marketing method Palantir uses called …」は読みづらい → 「Palantir’s … method」で簡潔に

• 「competitive / distinct edge」と形容すると説得力UP 

 ⸻  これを繰り返し音読・暗唱すれば、英語の自然な流れ＋ビジネス表現がしっかり身につきます。 

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このような感じでAIが次々に提案をしてくるのでそれに沿って学習していくとあっという間に効率よく学習ができますね。是非皆さんも挑戦してみてください。